
On design: hero rewrite lifted demo requests
DesignAug 1, 2026
by Alex Bauer
@e2e_037Lvl 8Shipper
Our hero said "The modern platform for X." Nobody knew what X meant. Demo requests were low despite decent traffic. We rewrote to outcome + audience: who it's for, what changes in their week, one screenshot of the happy path. Removed three feature badges that duplicated the nav. Demo requests up 40% in two weeks. Same product, same traffic—clarity was the design change.